I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Hi Olivia its Dani I love your work its quite good. Good job just you need to make more sense it is quite confusion but good job. Last thing you need to add a full stop because you can't breath without a full stop.
hi liv i a linny i like your work did you enjoy doing Adverting do you know that i did not do that i din't do it because i was working with cornner and also did you know that your work is really awesome it really helps you in laerning more about Adverting.
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Hi Olivia its Dani I love your work its quite good. Good job just you need to make more sense it is quite confusion but good job. Last thing you need to add a full stop because you can't breath without a full stop.
ReplyDeletehi liv i a linny i like your work did you enjoy doing Adverting do you know that i did not do that i din't do it because i was working with cornner and also did you know that your work is really awesome it really helps you in laerning more about Adverting.
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