I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Kia ora, Milla here from gilberthorpe school. I love your animation slide, But maybe just check some of your spelling and look back. I would love to no when theres new slides ! From- Milla
Hi my name is Fatima and I am a student at Owairaka district school I really like your animation You should check your spelling. You should make a part 2 of it.
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Kia ora, Milla here from gilberthorpe school.
ReplyDeleteI love your animation slide,
But maybe just check some of your spelling
and look back. I would love to no when theres new slides !
From- Milla
Hi my name is Fatima and I am a student at Owairaka district school I really like your animation You should check your spelling. You should make a part 2 of it.
ReplyDeletekia ora Olivia I like you slide. People should not be bullying. Maybe check your spelling before you post.
ReplyDeletehi its olivia and i like that you guys are giving me feed back i will do back and check my spelling next time thank you
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