I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Hi oliva. I really like your post. I really like the pretty backgrounds and the sun at the start. Maybe next time you could add some more information and some more slides of the story? Bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi oliva. I really like your post. I really like the pretty backgrounds and the sun at the start. Maybe next time you could add some more information and some more slides of the story? Bye!
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