I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Hi Olivia I think your shapes slide show, it is very thoughtful and you done a really good job making it. How long did it take to make it? Maybe next time you could of made the slide show go a bit slower.
Hi Olivia this is Sophia from Room 7 Hornby Primary School. I really like the slides that you put on there but maybe you can make the slides go slower. Becuse it was going to fast so I cuold not read it and I had to keep stopping it. I also have a question did you make the slides?
Kia ora Olivia m it is lucy from gilberthorpe school maybe next time you can add more coulor into it i enjoyed when you added the story bots song into it you taught me alot about 2D & 3D shapes. Blog you later
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Hi Olivia I think your shapes slide show, it is very thoughtful and you done a really good job making it. How long did it take to make it? Maybe next time you could of made the slide show go a bit slower.
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia this is Sophia from Room 7 Hornby Primary School. I really like the slides that you put on there but maybe you can make the slides go slower. Becuse it was going to fast so I cuold not read it and I had to keep stopping it. I also have a question did you make the slides?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia m it is lucy from gilberthorpe school maybe next time you can
ReplyDeleteadd more coulor into it i enjoyed when you added the story bots song into it
you taught me alot about 2D & 3D shapes. Blog you later
hy it is lexi her.my favourite part is whet tat you tiD you best.
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