I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Hello this is Sophia from Hornby Primary school. I really like the back round noise.and you used a great strategy to get a lot of comments. I like how you introduced your self and maybe you could change the colour of the font because I could not see it properly.
kia ora Olivia It's me Bea in the yellow room, your blog is amazing and the song remind me of my friends and maybe next time you could put more so we could learn more about your comment and we really learn something about commenting in our blog and put more!! blog you later Olivia~
kia ora it's Nikau.i like what you are using that was cool.next time check back at your words because you put on kia oral and it's kia ora.but that's really cool.
Kia ora Olivia, I like your post because the animations are nice and smooth and it's a great way to share your learning. Maybe you could work on your spelling and check if it makes sense next time.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello this is Sophia from Hornby Primary school. I really like the back round noise.and you used a great strategy to get a lot of comments. I like how you introduced your self and maybe you could change the colour of the font because I could not see it properly.
ReplyDeletekia ora Olivia It's me Bea in the yellow room,
ReplyDeleteyour blog is amazing and the song remind me of my friends and maybe next time you could put more so we could learn more about your comment and we really learn something about commenting in our blog and put more!!
blog you later Olivia~
kia ora it's Nikau.i like what you are using that was cool.next time check back at your words because you put on kia oral and it's kia ora.but that's really cool.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI like your post because the animations are nice and smooth and it's a great way to share your learning. Maybe you could work on your spelling and check if it makes sense next time.