I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Hello this is Sophia from Hornby Primary School. I like the way you showed us all the slides but maybe you could let us see all the slides for a longer time because I could not read all of them really fast. Maybe you could use a different person for the slides. Like use normal people. you could write some stuff before you post it.
Hi Olivia, I think your blog post is amazing. I also think it was really interesting it was also really long. I think it was really thoughtful that you made it. One thing I think you can work on is making it a little slower. Also how long did it take you to make it?
Kia Ora Oliva it is Lacie here. I like your blog post about change in the earth. Remember for next time to add a sentance or two about what you had to do. Did you think about adding a next step?
Kia Ora Olivia, I really like all the information you have put on this slide about inquiry. Maybe next time you could have an explanation of what you have done. Blog you later.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello this is Sophia from Hornby Primary School. I like the way you showed us all the slides but maybe you could let us see all the slides for a longer time because I could not read all of them really fast. Maybe you could use a different person for the slides. Like use normal people. you could write some stuff before you post it.
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia, I think your blog post is amazing. I also think it was really interesting it was also really long. I think it was really thoughtful that you made it. One thing I think you can work on is making it a little slower. Also how long did it take you to make it?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Oliva it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about change in the earth.
Remember for next time to add a sentance or two about what you had to do.
Did you think about adding a next step?
Kia Ora Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI really like all the information you have put on this slide about inquiry.
Maybe next time you could have an explanation of what you have done.
Blog you later.