I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Kia ora olivia good job on this it is really amazing i like how you facts about the animal in each slide good job keep up the good work Just a question how long did this take for you to complete
Kia Ora Olivia Trinity here. I like your blog post about Orana Park. Orana Park was really fun and we learned lots of things about all the different animals. You did really good on your blog post. Maybe next time you could add a introduction are at the top?
Kia Ora Olivia Kaycee here.ts was really fun and we learned lots of things about all the different animals. You did really good on your blog post its amazing. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information also put a introduction so then we know more of what your talking about. Well ill blog you later. Bye
Kia Ora Olivia M Olivia H here. I like your blog post about the Kea. When the Takitini hub went to Orana park I loved seeing the kea fly it was cool . You did lots of work and it looks really cool. Maybe next time you cloud put some wow word in there. did you like seeing the kea
kia ora olivia benaiah here i liked the way put all of the cool facts you brought me back to when we went to orana park it was fun next time you could put more words see you later bye
Kia Ora Olivia M! I liked the way you put so many facts and it is so good and interesting! Your picture of the meerkats is good, I remember that so many meerkats are playing with the food like they are swimming! Next time, you could use more facts and animals photo, It is really cool, I like it if you put more photos and facts! Bye!
Hi Olivia its Addison here. I liked the way you put the picture of the animal in the slide and this is a really good blog post keep up the good work. You taught me lots of stuff about animals especially the spring book and the gorilla. Next time you could make the words a but bigger so we can see the words otherwise this is a good blog post. frome Addison.
Hi Olivia, it's Raewyn. I enjoyed the part when you showed us the Animals in your slide in Orana Park. This reminded me of when...the Tasmanian Devils I know why they are called Devils because in night they have a terrifying scream and they stink as bad as a skunk. Next time, you could put some more decorations and changing the font. That looks cool. From: Raewyn.
Hi Olivia M i like the way you put the Hyena and the Meerkats and springboks and porcupine and tigers and tasmanian devil and gorillas and blog you later...
Kia Ora Olivia! Your work is nice, plenty of info. You did well on presenting all this information. Orana Park was really fun and I can see you enjoyed it too. Question, how long did it take to finish this? From Mikayla.
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Kia ora olivia
ReplyDeletegood job on this it is really amazing i like how you facts about the animal in each slide good job keep up the good work Just a question how long did this take for you to complete
Kia Ora Olivia Trinity here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about Orana Park. Orana Park was really fun and we learned lots of things about all the different animals. You did really good on your blog post.
Maybe next time you could add a introduction are at the top?
Blog you later.
Kia Ora Olivia Kaycee here.ts was really fun and we learned lots of things about all the different animals. You did really good on your blog post its amazing. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information also put a introduction so then we know more of what your talking about.
ReplyDeleteWell ill blog you later.
Bye
Kia Ora Olivia M Olivia H here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about the Kea. When the Takitini hub went to Orana park I loved seeing the kea fly it was cool . You did lots of work and it looks really cool.
Maybe next time you cloud put some wow word in there.
did you like seeing the kea
hi Olivia M its micah here i like your orana park slide it is good work i will see you bye
ReplyDeletekia ora olivia benaiah here
ReplyDeletei liked the way put all of the cool facts
you brought me back to when we went to orana park it was fun
next time you could put more words
see you later
bye
Kia Ora Olivia M! I liked the way you put so many facts and it is so good and interesting! Your picture of the meerkats is good, I remember that so many meerkats are playing with the food like they are swimming! Next time, you could use more facts and animals photo, It is really cool, I like it if you put more photos and facts! Bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia its Addison here.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put the picture of the animal in the slide and this is a really good blog post keep up the good work.
You taught me lots of stuff about animals especially the spring book and the gorilla.
Next time you could make the words a but bigger so we can see the words otherwise this is a good blog post.
frome Addison.
Hi it's Cody good facts did you now tigers live in there own area next time try put more facts ok bye.
ReplyDeleteHi its brodie here i like the slide this part gave me a memory when our class went.what did you like about orana park.
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia, it's Raewyn. I enjoyed the part when you showed us the Animals in your slide in Orana Park. This reminded me of when...the Tasmanian Devils I know why they are called Devils because in night they have a terrifying scream and they stink as bad as a skunk. Next time, you could put some more decorations and changing the font. That looks cool. From: Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia M i like the way you put the Hyena and the Meerkats and springboks and porcupine and tigers and tasmanian devil and gorillas and blog you later...
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Olivia!
ReplyDeleteYour work is nice, plenty of info. You did well on presenting all this information. Orana Park was really fun and I can see you enjoyed it too. Question, how long did it take to finish this?
From Mikayla.